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December 19th, 2004

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10:27 pm - Hey I'm new....
Umm I really had no where else to go....the other writing journal community were a bunch of pansies ( if you don't mind me saying so) I just wrote this song and I wanna put it in this book for a friend, but I'm so attached to it I can't tell if its crap or semi-good....if you don't mind and have the time, could someone read it and tell me their thoughts....please??.....this song is sad, real sad, but its got a lot of rage and anger sprinkled throughout it, well, enough stahling, here it is....

I'm so consumed in all my gloom
I haven't noticed the impending doom
I wanna scream ( x2)
My voice is locked deep inside
where my self confidence hides
I wanna let it out! I'm gonna let it out!
I'm shouting
no one hears me
I'm alone
I'm unknown
and I'm on my own
Why can't you hear me scream?! ( x2)
My frustration builds
My heart is sealed
I just can't take it anymore
I don't know what I'm yelling for
My mascara is running
My tears are falling
My heart is wrenched in pain
But you don't even notice I'm here
I'm gonna Scream!!!! ( gonna scream)
Have you looked my way
at all today?
Have you noticed my bloodshot eyes
or my heavy sighs?
You were my friend
the one I could depend
Where are you now?!!?
I'm in a crowded room
but I guess I shouldn't assume
anybody cares
Where are you know!!?!
I'll make you hear me
You just can't leave me
I'll scream

.....so, what do you think?
Current Mood: nervousnervous...excited, but nervous
Current Music: "sparkle and fade" Everclear

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Date:December 21st, 2004 05:32 am (UTC)
welcome to the group!

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