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12:34 am - Here's Some Song Lyrics...
This is a highly personal song, although the audience probably won't ever get it unless I tell them. I put up a demo if you want to hear the melody. (It's a very rough demo...)

Any tips or feedback would be appreciated... I'd like to know how someone who doesn't know me would interpret the song.

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The Boy You Love Is Dead

when you left him by himself
when you ran the other way
when you left him in his head
the boy you love is dead

when you walked into the house
when you wanted to wake up
when you went to sleep instead
the boy you love is dead

you think your man is dying as the blood spills on the floor
even though it looks like him it is a different boy

when you pointed to the sky
when you said your last goodbye
when you laid him in his bed
the boy you love is dead

you think your man is dying as the blood spills on the floor
even though I look like him I am a different boy

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From:les_savy_danse
Date:June 30th, 2004 04:32 pm (UTC)
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the first impression i got was that someone (i'm assuming it's a girl, ha) broke this boy's heart and he ended up killing himself over it. but there's another boy who is in love with her too and he is dying because she doesn't see him? i don't know. i'm probably totally missing some crucial point. i really like it though. the rhythm and rhyme scheme make it flow very nicely.

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